The poster has been taken down!

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Thank you for the reply again :DI’ve made the respective changes to your notes now and painted them in orange. I hope this will suffice haha x…

@syn Alrighty. I added quite a bit, I may have fumbled with the progression of the story and how grammar reads in there, but I hope it comes to terms …

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Thank you for the reply,
I had figured dwarves were poor swimmers and hence referred to it as a thing he and his clan therefore would fill o…